Look for ways of saying what you want to say in as brief a way as possible. Try not to repeat yourself and don't use too many long sentences! (I know that year 6 children are encouraged to write "complex sentences", but you'll rarely see two 20-plus-word sentences next to each other in book!)
K.I.S.S. don't K.I.L.L. your work
Keep It Short and Simple don't Keep It Long and Lengthy! |